I like how you gave your opinion about mulitple topics and not just one. Your thoughts were very insightful and i agreed with them. You should try and open you ideas by using some quotes to back up you ideas... weather you agree or disagree with the quote it will make your argument a lot stronger.
Your thoughts about the ethic's of freedom brought up everything we discussed in class and showed how you payed attention and you backed up your opinion nicely.
Your statement "But if we are fully free then our society wouldn't have any type of consequence." Really made me think how no matter how hard we try we are held back by society and there rules... which can't be bended or broken in anyway.
You should once again reread over your work for punctuation and spelling mistakes, but overall i think this post was better then your last. Keep up the good work i can't wait to read your next post.
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